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"...he didn't even say goodbye. He didn't take the time to lie...bang bang...my baby shot me down.."

Photo/Direction/Model: Fox Collins

The Vision: I decided to create my take on Nancy Sinatra's song "Bang Bang". Instead of living with lingering feelings of broken heart, I wanted to convey more of a sense of finality; suicide.

The Specs: This shot was made on a roof top at around 1 or 2am so my lighting was limited to a single key light. Luckily I chose to use a white backdrop that ended up diffusing some of the harsher shadows.

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I like the concept you are trying to get at. "Bang Bang" is an awesome song. I think you did a great job in making an even composition :-) One of my suggestions is: the main focus seems to the the guy holding the gun to the right. The pictures to the left seem of less important....but the way you set up the clairty of both things seems reversed. I think that the guy to the right should sharper and not as blurry so that you focus on him...he has a good expression that makes you think about what he's thinking.....then by blurring the images to the left, your eye would then drift to the other side. :-)

I'm not sure what is missing, but I think you should add something else to get your point across clearer....Well I hope I wasn't too harsh :-\
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July 31, 2009
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Jul 29, 2009, 1:39:34 PM

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